William J. Brooke

A Perfectly Good Lyric: Part Two

A Perfectly Good Lyric: Part Two

“Musicals aren’t written – they’re rewritten.” I was living this old adage, as I worked on a rewrite of the last section of our song, “A Perfectly Good Umbrella.” I was working to remove the word, “insignificant” from an early line of the section, so as not to lessen the impact of the word when used in the final line of the same section.

In the rewriting process, I realized another fault of the lyric: it took too long to